I, Capture Forever
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I, Capture Forever...and Clasp it Tight Within My Hand...
On Summit's Peak For All to Hear...I Shout Out: "I'm the Man!"
I, Shout for Victory...For All That Has Been Attained...
Both You and I Fought so Hard to Get Here...Now Look at All We've Gained!
A Long and Unending Path formed ahead...As I trudged steadily one step...after another...
With Each Footstep I took...I watched the Plans to Hold Me Back...Slowly Begin to Smother.
Victory, Power, and Determination Prevail...
Let No Sign of Defeat Be Told which Pertains to this Tale!
Thinkest Thou...That you would hold me back with a taunting gesture or an unkind word...?
Don't underestimate me for a moment...If Iron sharpens Iron... Imagine then...What then made the edge on my sword ?
Don't ever think you know exactly how to defeat me for certain...
I'm in this for the long haul...And...This Show's not over...'Til I close the Curtain!
For I will ride off into the Sunset...And it will be in a Blaze of Glory...
My Final Chapter...Which No One Will Believe...Will Tell the Whole Part of the Story.
A Wide Brush will be used for Painting My Life's Portrait...And My Path...
And it will tell the story of who I was...Long into that of my aftermath.
You think me...One Insignificant Man...Upon which there is no unique distinction...?
I Stand as the One...Who'll defeat Whatever Stands in My Way...I'll Defeat it Beyond Recognition !
Have'nt you ever just wanted to shout out Victory...For no good reason at all?
Have you Ran the Race that's before you...And pushed on...Even after you hit the Wall?
Have you stared down Time on this planet...And realized that you're still part of the living?
Have you taken all there is to take from them...and taken all that they have given?
Have you Climbed a Mountain Peak... Only to Find...
The Mountain Peak you Conquered...Was one you were Always Destined to Climb?
For each Part of My Life...I know I Captured each and every day...
Do you think differently of me .."Poof, Be Gone!"...You're in my way!
For those who are Hurting...For those that think that they don't have a Prayer...
Listen to these words of Victory I Say....And Know that Someone Listened to You...Someone Does Care.
I, Capture Forever...I Have Been Through Things All Alone...Where No One Was Taking Notes...
So.. Whomever Shall Try And Thwart Against Me...I Will Ram Victory Back Down Their Throats!
Do You Feel the Victory...That Is Well Within Your Grasp...?
Then Shout Out..."You Have The Victory"...And...Go Kick That "Defeated Attitude" Of Yours' _ss!
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Well...While You Might Find This Poem...Highly Unusual. I Find It Very Encouraging And Re-Affirming!
What Else Would You Expect From a "Manly" Poetry Man...Huh? Ha!
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maven101: You got the part of marching to a different drummer right, my friend. This ol' Manly Poetry Man has been a little off-kilter...for awhile now...Ha! But, I do appreciate that you see that in my work! That was a great thing to say! Oh...and the "experiencing" thing was awesome...as well! Thank you very much, my friend. It always makes my day...to see my Marine friend...is enjoying this "kooky" manly poetry writings. Always appreciate your reading them ...and the comments thereof. With Best Regards...Humbly, MPM
great stoty truely amasing (comment on me please
KKbunnylover: Thank you for this really kind comment. Ok...I'll shoot on over to your part of Hub World. Are you a New Hubber here?
kick that ass! lol I loved it! you never disappoint me with your original and talented writings....
Pachuca213: I'm laughing from the enthiusiasm of how you wrote "Kick that Ass!" Thank you so much for this comment. Really glad you loved this one...and so glad it did not disappoint...also.
That's right...Ladies and Gentleman...Here at Hub Pages...You can get all kinds of support from your fellow Hubbers. From advice and support to a rallying cry of "Kick that Ass"...We are all with ya' every step of the way! With Humble Regards and a Big Thanks for stopping by, JJ...Sincerely, MPM
Great inspiring poem. I linked it to one I wrote this morning I hope you don't mind. You never disappoint!
This was really good. Loved it.
Tammy Lochmann: Thank you for the link...I absolutly don't mind. I am going over to see the one you just wrote. Thank you for your kind comment...as always. humble regards, MPM
Alekhouse: Very glad to know that you loved this one...and thanks for this great comment. Best Regards, MPM
I'm going to "Go Kick That "Defeated Attitude" Of My _ss! Well- after lunch maybe. If there's time later this afternoon. Unless I get busy...
Micky Dee: Ha! There's plenty of time to get around to "Kickin that Defeated Attitudes' _ss" later...Why rush it? Great comment...and a good laugh to go along with it...from the mind of One of the Marine Corps finest: Mickey Dee. Thanks for stoppin' in, my friend!
I am now inspired to run out there and conquer the unconquerable. Very motivating to this soldier MPM.
wesleycox: Ok then...It is time to conquer that which is unconquerable....for each and everyone of us! We all deserve some Victories in our lifes...that's for dang sure! This is just my everyday humble manly poetry way...of saying to go out and shout for Victory...and Kick some of that Defeated Attitudes' _ss...Ha! (Shoot...I need to hear this kind of stuff more than anyone.) Thanks for your comment....and for reading this one. Best of Success in whatever needs conquering, soldier! Respectfully, MPM
I'd kick some butt if I could, I would, yes, but I might hurt myself, so I'll use my pen like you just did! Good job.
ralwus: And you are kicking butt with the pen (or the keyboard)...especially here on Hubpages...and taking names.
And there is that old addage: The pen is mightier than the sword! So there you go, my friend. Good to see ya, C...and hope that all is well with you! Humble Regards, MPM
You have inspired me to go "kick some of that Defeated _ss Attitude" too!! I think I can do it now!
Absolutely loved this!
ris8994: "Alright-tyyyy then"...Go kick some deafeated attitude _ss! And may you have the Best of Success...while in the process. Thanks for stoppin' in and commentin' on this one...and for the readin' of it. Best Regards, MPM
Loved it, triple loved it! My favorite line - "So.. Whomever Shall Try And Thwart Against Me...I Will Ram Victory Back Down Their Throats!"
raisingme: Wow...that's great...a triple loving it...on this one.."Thanks". Ya' don't think that line was a little over the top? Ha! Here's to your Victory, raising me. Thanks for stoppin' by and readin' this one. Appreciate your leaving a comment...also. Sincere Regards, MPM
Being a girly girl, it was really interesting to read the thoughts of a manly man.
sheila b.: Well then ...Miss "girly girl" thanks for stopping in and reading some of this "manly man" stuff ! Really do appreciate that and Glad you found it interesting! Humble Regards, MPM
Very Nice, to win and conquer and believe in yourself, to win the battles in life. I like the message! Dont stop fighting, I came to drop by because I like to read some inspirations, and I got it, Memorial Day --- great day manly, I am not a defeatist so I fully appreciate this hub, Maita
prettydarkhorse: Something about that smile on your avatar pic tells me that you are a very positive person! To win and conquer and believe in yourself...and to win the battles in life...Heck ya'! That's all we get in this world sometimes...is the ability to get back-up...when we should'a been kicked down for good! No one can take away from you a Victory that is truly yours...alone! I have a feeling I am preaching to the choir...if I type this out to you, though...Ha! Best of Memorial day to you...and all it stands for...Maita. Thank you...so much for stoppin' in and readin' this one...boldly claiming "I, Capture Forever!" Really appreciate your comment...as well. Best of regards to you, MPM
maven101 Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago
Very manly, Manly...I really liked that kicken' ass bit...
You listen to a different drummer, my friend, and thank God for that...You are always a pleasure to read ...No, not read...Experience...Thanks for the share, Larry